I've been keeping up with the series of articles relating to marriage. The previous three have been quite interesting. When I started reading this one, I noticed the mention of "homework" and wondered if that means Zoraïs have some form of school. No big deal, maybe a hint into homin education systems and not too OOC.
Then I got to this part:
HP? Since when is HP an acceptible in-character term? How do homins see/know/monitor their HP? If whoever wrote the article had just called it "life rings" instead, it would've been better...The bride and groom make each others rings which we wear on the index finger because we are told this is the one that links to your soul.. HP rings are a nice gesture, to indicate the long life of the marriage.
I don't mean to disrespect the work that has gone into writing all these fine articles. I've found them very interesting and informative. But I'm just a little miffed at how an official article was allowed to fall OOC. Unless HP really is IC? If so, I'd love an explanation of how.