Fanwork

[dam23]

Here is one of my latest drawings ...
eerrrr ... ok actually it's axilis who's drawn it, not me, but I though I'd try and take the credit for it :P

http://ryzom.info/images/artwork_axilis_19_01_2005.jpg

here goes, comments please ;)

[thewarcc]

Wow.....................
Very very nice!

[kibsword]

Axi sure is talented dam

[xenofur]

very well done, great potential there, but i'll point out a few errors:
-shading on the breasts is a bit off, left breast get's light from above and slightly to the right, while the right one gets light from above and the lower right oO
--there also seem to be two light sources, one from above, one from the right
-the hip curve is a bit too sharp when going inwards
-the whole pic is slanted to the right a little
-muscle structure on the lower arms is missing
-fingers are too short
-symmetry on the symbol in the background is not quite correct

hope that helps him improve on his next pic

[dam23]

well actually, this is a photo of the drawing, taken w/ a digital camera, so the lighting sure must be odd :P

[xenofur]

i'll mark what i'm talking about =)

[xenofur]

http://exekutor1.ex.funpic.de/futallaby ... php?res=89
there, i marked the highlights and shadows created from the light above and from the light to the right in different colours =)

[dam23]

oops u re right and i ve just seen the altar-symetry problem thx for the hints i ll think about it for the next one ah and for the fingers it s because they are not in the front view but a little in the back.
anyway thx for ur comments

----Axilis----soon (tm) dam's wife----

[xenofur]

glad to hear it's useful
try the following with the fingers: shading on the palm and fingers(don't forget the thumb) and have them point more outwards
perhaps you could get someone to do that pose for you so you can see what i mean

[dazman76]

Very nice indeed Great work Axi