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A ryzom-inspired ballad

Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 6:48 am
by komissar
Greetings all.
I, Komissar, the bard of the Oder of the Nameless am happy to present for your attention my newest creation - aRyzom inspired ballad :)
I'd be happy to hear your thoughts about t :)

The search fr ryzom

Tis true that I have traveled far and wide,
Imagination was my only guide.
And every world that I have ever passed
A million and one reflections cast.
The creatures took bizarre and crazy shapes,
The men I’ve met – unique was every face.
Before my eyes eternal soul itself
Went through a metamorphosis. I have
Partaken in the downfall of kings,
I have destroyed the master of the rings,
I have repelled the might of goblin hordes,
I have invented runes and magic words.
But though I was quite free to place my throne,
I had no home, no friends, I was alone…

But thank the Gods my search proved a success,
Cause finally I chanced upon a place
Where I am whole, my spirit soars free,
For I, at last, have found a family
And friendly faces share my joy and grief
We have our land, ideals to believe
And real foes, whom we can just forgive
And heal their wounds, and let them go in peace.
And every spring the mighty blossom-trees
Make souls sing and leave us stronger, wiser
In this enchanting land
The world of Ryzom!

Have fun guys! And see you in game!

Re: A ryzom-inspired ballad

Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 8:30 am
by acridiel
Oooh, very nice *aplauds*

/tar Kommissar
/bow

CU
Acridiel

Re: A ryzom-inspired ballad

Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 11:24 am
by rabcaz
Such lovely words, it was a pleasure reading my friend.
Thank you


// Drakfot

Re: A ryzom-inspired ballad

Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 2:07 pm
by raven41
........ :)

Re: A ryzom-inspired ballad

Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 8:02 pm
by legokid
Truely lovely me friend, I hope we can team some time.

//Windra

Re: A ryzom-inspired ballad

Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 4:54 am
by komissar
Thanks for the positive response guys :)

I really appreciate it