Zoraï Brotherhood
When I read this, it reminded me of those IQ tests, "select the one that is different from the rest"
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Other than gender issues (Sisterhood?), the rest of the titles seem to qualify the homin wearing them, but the Zorai one makes me think of the "a fraternal or trade organization" aspect first, before the actual homin -- Sounds more like a Guild name than a homin title.
With the rest, I can say: "I am a vassal" or "I am a citizen", "I am a patriot".. but "I am a brotherhood"? it's like implying it is missing the "member". A title should be "priest" not priesthood, "brother" not brotherhood, Neighbor, etc.
Other comments.... Well, in all honesty (but I appreciate the effort) I don't like them. Citizenship has been used in another context. Vassal is a bit toooo meaning servitude, and patriot... I can't imagine a Mel Gibson Frahar.... but hey, these are only my opinions, I can live with that
(what's wrong with "Zoraï, Matis, Tryker, Fyros citizen"?)